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A Madness Shared by Two
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Just a story :P
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Characters


Main Character *Kishi*

Kishi is a new born vampire struggling to adapt to her new form. She always puts on a happy face, but underneath that happy beautiful face is a lot of pain. On her 13 birthday her blood was sucked out and she was bitten. Unlike most people who die, Kishi was lucky and healthy enough to survive. She is the youngest Vampire alive besides Moe who is only 11. She has a really spunky bright personality that draws people in but is very reckless at times. She stands up for what she believes in and never takes no for an answer. Her recklessness causes her the to get in trouble a lot, whether it with teachers, vampire slayers, or, worst of all, mean gossipy girls!

2nd kid Vampire *Also Needs Name* (temporary name is Moe)

Moe and Kishi are in some ways polar opposites. When Kishi and Moe first met they never talked to each other. He is very anti-social because he thinks most humans are to shallow to understand him. After a while Moe discovers Kishi is not as shallow as most humans and he comes out of his shell and they become best friends. He is able to fix most of the problems Kishi causes. Moe is always kind and listens to what people has to say. He is youngest vampire alive, only being 11 when he changed almost 400 years ago.

Vampire Slayer Atari (yea he has a real name xD)

Atari is One of the few that believes in Vampires and joined the Vampire Slayers when he was only 12. When Atari was little his parents were killed by newborn Vampires right before his eyes, he was able to escape, but became bitter for the rest of his life. When he was 12 he found out about the secret Vampire slaying organization that uses a special technique to kill vampires. From that day he swore to make Vampires an extinct species. Atari is a very talented Slayer, even though he is only 16.


Detective *Nameless* (Desmond)

Desmond was Kishi best friend before she "died". The mysterious murders that happened right after Kishi’s corpse disappeared, caused him to become secretly suspicious or Kishi’s "death". Desmond is has an I.Q. over 170 and can process information in the blink of an eye. Despite this intelligence he fails to be a rational thinker and sometimes lets his imagination get the best of him. Unlike Moe, Desmond is a really big talker.


Moe’s human friend (Keiko)


In novel 3 she comes in as the "new girl" at Kishi and Moe’s middle school. She was having trouble making friends because of her many personality quirks. (like for example her obsession with jelly, her panda shaped back-pack and many other things) When she met Kishi she immediately liked her and was desperate to be her friend. Kishi tried to avoid Keiko as much as possible because of her "sweet" smelling blood but eventually ended up attacking her. After the accident Keiko discovers that Moe and Kishi are vampires and befriends Moe. When Keiko was 6 years old her 14-year-old sister was mysteriously murdered right in front of her father. After her sister died her Mother and Father were sent into depression. Her father soon started taking drugs and was claiming the existence of "Vampires". He was constantly fighting with Keiko’s mother and was abusing her and Keiko. He was sent into a mental hospital and is still there when the story takes place. Keiko’s mother always thought her ex-husband was mental but Keiko secretly thought Vampires COULD exist.


Kishi and Moe Vs The Cullens

The Vampires in my story are very similar to the Cullens but also very different. Kishi and Moe are vegetarian vampires like the Cullens. They do not feed from living humans but rather from animals or dead humans. They are much stronger and faster then humans, but not as strong as the Cullens. Most Vampires can die if they are crushed, drowned or stabbed. But they cannot get sick or die in there sleep. Kishi and Moe are different then most vampires because they cannot die unless they are killed by other Vampires or Vampire slayers. They do not have yellow eyes, they have the same color eyes they did when they were human except when they are thristy there eyes turn either black, purple or red. They also do not shine when they go out in the sun. They can go out in the sun without any trouble, but they do get sunburned very easily xD. Also there thirst is more controllable then the Vampires in Twilight. The older Vampires like Moe had more trouble controlling there thirst then the new Vampires like Kishi. Rather then being thirsty the first couple of years the modern vampires are only thirsty for the first couple weeks.

Vampire History

The first Vampires used to roam the world freely without any trouble. They would feed every night but in 1320 B.C. a vampire named (something) found fellow vampires and made "Vampire Rules". The Vampires weren’t allowed to feed and torment other humans as much. They weren’t allowed to expose themselves, otherwise they would be killed. (something) and his coven of vampires were very large and were very strong fighters. Since then Vampires were kept hidden from the world, they would kill humans almost everyday but still remain hidden. The Vampire population grew because every once in a while someone would survive getting there blood sucked out. Before the Vampire Slayers started in the 1700s the Vampire population was over 6000. 100 of the population was part of (somethings) European coven. The Vampire slayers have slaughtered almost every single Vampire they discover. Only very few have survived. And others were never killed because they were never discovered or they were impossible to track.




























Volume 1

Kishi has the perfect family and the perfect life but on her 13th birthday right before her big "Birthday Bash" she is found dead in the forest. She was murdered without a trace. What really happened was that Kishi encountered a new born Vampire and her blood was completely sucked out and she started to transform into a Vampire. A couple of days after her death her family put her in a coffin and was going to bury her the next day. Right after Kishi’s body was moved to the coffin her transformation into a vampire was complete. That same day the 11 people were mysteriously murdered and Kishi’s corpse was missing. Kishi was a mad newborn on the lose. She can’t remember any of her old life at first and continues killing innocent people. Though soon afterwards the good Vampires Moe and his "mom" find Kishi and take her in. Moe and his mother took care of the newborn Kishi and got her thirst under control. Kishi and Moe’s mother become very close very fast. Moe’s mother tells Kishi what she has happened to her and what she has become. All of Kishi’s human memories come back to her and she is overwhelmed by sadness and guilt. Kishi’s just sees herself as a monster and cannot forgive herself for murdering the innocent. She also feels guilty because she believes her death has made her family suffer but doesn’t want them to see the monster she has become. At first Kishi absolutely can’t stand Moe and often get frustrated when Moe doesn’t talk to her. They soon become friends after Moe gets to know Kishi better.

Volume 2

Kishi is soon able to resist the scent of blood pretty well due to some of Moe’s blood neutralizing poisons. Kishi insists on going school with Moe and at first Moe refuses but Kishi is able to prove she can resist human blood really well for a newborn. Kishi starts 8th grade and immediately has problems but not with her thirst but with other girls. The school Kishi enters is ran by 3 beautiful rich fashionable bitchy girls. As soon as they see beautiful Kishi hanging out with beautiful Moe they become jealous and start to pick fight with her. Instead of ignoreing them Kishi stands up to by embarrassing them in front of the school. The 3 bitches statues falls and Kishi becomes the Alpha of the school. While Moe is worried about Kishi resistance to blood wearing out, Kishi is enjoying the attention. Kishi becomes closer to Moe and they become best friends. Kishi continues to cause trouble at school but for the most part she isn’t doing anything out of the rules. She gets her blood from animals and is able to keep her thirst under control.

Volume 3

Things start to go wrong when a new girl Keiko tries to befriend Kishi. Keiko has abnormally sweet smelling blood which forces Kishi to push her away and to be mean. Keiko won’t leave Kishi alone no matter how hard she tries, but Kishi refuses to leave the school even when Moe insists. One day Keiko get injured in Gym and Kishi attacks her and serverly injures her(Kishi broke her arm and left a deep gash on her back) because the teachers could not pull her off. Moe was able to pull her off but Kishi was still expelled from school even though Keiko didn’t press charges. Meanwhile back at home Desmond is still suspicious about Kishi’s death and discovers the Vampire Slayer organization web site which is disguised as a game web site. Moe and his Mom decide to send Kishi away so the Vampire Slayers won’t come after them. Kishi get very upset and runs off but Moe finds her an hour later(Moe can track her scent) then he tells her about the Vampire Slayers.

Volume 4

Keiko eventually got better. Before Kishi was sent to live with another family Keiko went over to her house and caught her and moe doing some strange things then went home. She soon came to the conclusion that Moe and Kishi were Vampires. She later confronts Moe about her discovery. Moe at first denies it but then after Keiko emotionally tells him her life story Moe admits that he and Kishi are vampires. Moe and Keiko soon become very close friends, even though Kishi still avoids Keiko. Meanwhile back at home Desmond is doing some research on the Vampire slayers just because he is bored and finds them fascinating. He decides to hack into there system and discovers there doing some research on this girl that looks exactly like….KISHI! Desmond is shocked and started to think up of all of these irrational plans. Meanwhile the Vampire Slayers sends 18 year old Davey to investigate Kishi.

Volume 5

Desmond goes for a 2 week with his father, who lives 4 hours away from Kishi. Desmond then tells his father about a friend who moved away he wants to visit. Desmond finds out Kishi’s address from the Vampire Slayer website and shows up on Kishi’s frount doorstep. Moe answers the door and assumes Desmond is a Vampire Slayer. He tells Desmond that Kishi was lives somewhere far away. When Kishi sees Desmond from the 2 story window she her first reaction is to come down and hug him. Desmond is shocked and nearly crushed by Kishi (She wasn’t being very careful). Kishi is shocked to see Desmond and asks why he is hear. Then Desmond tells her that he found a picture of you on the Vampire Slayer website and that they are planning on investigating her. Meanwhile Atari comes to Kishi’s town and investigates her. In the same week someone was murdered. Atari chooses to ignore the Vampire Slayers instructions and decides to act on his own. Kishi decides to leave with Desmond after his warning but Davey tracks Kishi down and captures her.



What the ********?
Wow the plot for my book has changed A LOT





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PrincessCurran
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comment Commented on: Sat Jul 26, 2008 @ 03:29pm
Nice! biggrin


comment Commented on: Fri Mar 06, 2009 @ 01:03am
Congrats, my story is so much betterXD razz "-



n-zaine94
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A Madness Shared by Two
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comment Commented on: Sun Mar 08, 2009 @ 11:27pm
This story has changed a lot. Thank goodness. This is s**t is horrible!


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