Dying Hopes 3(Written by:The Black Angel of Chaosx)
(The "Dying Hopes" series is based on true events in my life.)
Feeling left out peer presure builds
and that empty spot of knowing you don't belong feels
Lusting for acceptance, fear within
Knowing secound chances don't come unless though sin
Swaying your beliefs to be Mr."it"
to be relaxed and cool to get the chick
To naive to know dreams really don't come true
but let's not stop now, the story isn't through
So he slip's in to darkness for his 15 minutes of fame
completely unaware of how his apart of a bigger game
But were young and life is new
surely everyone has made a mistake or two
So as feelings colide, the thoughts of hopes and dreams with her subside
and everying dies just like your broken pride inside
And images of her flash through your mind
distracting reality, affecting with time
And while your writing this down you know your out of time
then complete emptiness steals your mind
"So I looked for love but couldn't find it
I gave you my soul but you still denided it
I''ve failed myself and couldn't hide it
now with a dead reality my parent's find it"
Becasue I hate what i've become
and now i'm permanently numb...
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That was your best poem yet!!
Oh my goodness.
I loved it. =]
You must you must send PM explaining what real life stuff it's about, okay??
I'll wait for it.
Now comes the icky part. D=
5th stanza it should be 'he's a part'
6th stanza should say 'we're'
10th should say 'denied'
and 11th should be 'parents' without the '
love it though =]
love you too, my aspiring poet <3333333333