Chapter 1: The Capture of The White Falcon
Captain James Fox of the White Falcon and his crew choose this day to set sail towards Madrid, Spain... which proved to be a crucial mistake on their part. At first, it looked like it was going off without a hitch...until Captain Fox fell unconcious as soon as he stepped on deck. The crew became shocked for a second, until a young girl, possibly around 15 or 16, dropped down onto the deck, a plank of wood in one hand, a cocked handgun pointed at the crew in the other. An uncomfortable silence followed. Then Captain Fox's first mate started laughing uncontrollably. "Oh, your funny, little girl. I doubt you even know how to work that thi-" He was stopped short when the girl pulled the trigger and shot him in the head. This freaked the crew out. The girl glared at the crew, turning the gun's attention to them. "Now, move out of the way. My captain and crew are comin' through." To avoid being shot, the crew did as they were told. Much to their surprise, a single-file line of girls between 13 and 17 made their way through. One of them, around 15, walked behind them with an overly confident strut. She glanced down at Captain Fox, tipped her tri-cornered hat and said, "Thanks for the ship, mate." With shock, one of the crewmates shouted, "What do you think you're doing!? This is piracy!" The captain turned to him and remarked, "And your point is?"
With a huff of frustration, he began to pull his sword out of it's sheath. The captain turned to the girl that knocked Captain Fox unconcious and said, "Rebecca, if you would?" Rebecca smirked and set the heel of her boot against the walkway from the ship to the dock. With a great deal of strength, she shoved the plank off of the ship, sending Captain Fox and a few of his crewmates into the water. This woke Captain Fox up and he swam back to the surface, gasping for air. He watched in shock as his ship sailed away. He sighed in disappointment and muttered to himself, "Well, that's a fine kettle of fish."
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Arr! pirate I felt very piratey today, so I decided to bring up a pirate story idea I had stuck in my head for a while know...and it ain't even fully developed yet. sweatdrop CLIFFHANGER!!!!!! xd I know someone's gonna hate me for that. xd Well, technically this'll probably be "Chapter 1 Part 1", but you get the idea...... sweatdrop Oh crap, I think I jinxed myself. I already have one story in progress and I started this...WHAT HAVE I DONE!!!???? I BURN FOR THIS!!!!!!!! burning_eyes ... sweatdrop Overeacted, sorry. I can pull through it.
P.S. please comment. But if I don't recognize you as my friend and you bad mouth it, it will be reported...fair warning. 3nodding
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And no, I don't believe you jinxed yourself. Remember, me and Ash are both writing 2 stories at once as well. Sad part is we BOTH promised that we would never do that. hehe.