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My Poems and Such
well i was kinda just looking for a place to put up my poems so i could get some opinions on them. theyre a little emo, but dont worry, im not suicidal...
dont even know why i wrote this one. just did.

"Forgive me
For i know ill break your heart
Forgive me
I have loved you from the start
Forgive me
I am broken, cant you see
Forgive me
Im too broken to be me"

please comment, offer any criticism you have, but PLEASE be nice. no flamers.






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davidl8ly
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commentCommented on: Sun Jun 14, 2009 @ 03:16am
cry I hate to see you so distressed, but you said this ain't necessarily you. Hope not...I do real good repair work by the way. heart


Tell me who you are, I am spellbound
You cannot have this control on me
Everywhere I go, I am spellbound
I will break the spell you put on me
commentCommented on: Sat Jun 20, 2009 @ 07:57pm
Would you really break my heart? cry I know you wouldn't really! biggrin heart



davidl8ly
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Leading The Phalanx
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commentCommented on: Sun Aug 30, 2009 @ 04:43pm
... I hate you, i can write anything this br00tal. lol ninja


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