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plakala!!! yay!! me got awesome life! mwahahahaha!!
A story i wrote. I am really good. PLEASE read!
So, i am actually kind of like an author. I love reading and writing and i type stories and roleplays all the time.
So, heres something rando that i just made up. smile hope you all like it. Loveys! heart heart -ANIMA

A girl walked through an abandoned city. Her blue eyes scanned her suroundings with anxiousness. Where am I? She asked herself. She looked around again and a gust of wind pushed her black hair into her eyes. She heard a sound, but she had no idea what it was. Something had moved but she was looking through her hair, so all she saw was a blurred human-like figure run past her faster than a train. She moved her hair to go back beside her face with a shaking hand. "wh-Who's there?" She asked, Her blue eyes searching around her. She shook- she could feel everybone in her body shaking. Who- or what had just passed her? A chill went up her spine and she turned around, kicking at the air. She then saw a body on the ground behind her. New blood splotched the nose from where she had kicked the male. She scanned the body with a gasp. She couldn't have done the rest of this. There was blood all over the body, flowing out of new cuts.

She knelt next to the body. He's dead! She panicked in her thoughts. Then she felt something on her hand. Looking down at her hand, she saw the person had moved a blood stained hand on hers. She looked at the boys face, worried. "Run." He said. With a panicked, worried shake of her head she stared at the boy. "who did this to you?" She asked, pretty sure the boy would die soon. She looked at his chest, that was also blotched in new blood. She gasped again. there was a perfect slice through his heart. how is he still living? She thought, her eyes wide.

Still staring at the boy's chest, she gasped once more. the slice started to pull together, with a kind of steam seeming to rise from it. She looked at the rest of his cuts. The other cuts seemed to zip up also, all eminating a steam. She looked at the boys hand, which seemed to have parts of skin repairing it as the smoke came through. She stood, frightened, and stared at the boy. "how.." She stepped back slowly, nearly tripping over her feet. The blood that covered the boy had also dissapeared with the cuts. She felt her body stiffen and every bone shake once more. "what... are you?" She asked quietly, her eyes wide and scared. He sat up and turned his head to look at her. His red eyes stared at her and she gasped.

smile thanks for reading. smile )))) If you want to hear more into the story, just comment. once I get 5 comments I'll go on from where I left off. Thank you, and I love you all!!


ii-3atz Bunnii3z- xD
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  • User Comments: [2]
    ii-3atz Bunnii3z- xD
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    Wed Jul 01, 2009 @ 10:26pm


    Still no comments? what kinda friends are u? lol jk. smile


    ii-3atz Bunnii3z- xD
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    Sun Jul 05, 2009 @ 07:53am


    yay. today 2 of my friends told me they liked this story. these two friends I know in real life and they have gaias too.


    These loving friends were

    Edwardcullensluvr906906

    and

    xxMoka-chan

    thank you, my friends! 3 more comments and I will go through the next part. ^^ you can also tell me if you liked it through something else, if wanted, and i'll put u on here like i did these two.

    -THANKIES!!


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