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Silver Moon Whisperer (challange/poem)
we haven't met but i am the one hopping to get into your loneliness
with a whisper that lives your a gift of scripture, a picture of holiness
and i'll be waiting till it's only yes, in the day you hold me
just to know that it must be sacred with the trust of a naked infant
the instant life is held
see how the night is held?
a gallery of galaxies and your the most attractive piece
you call to my spirit threw the walls of my flesh
yea i fall when i hear "my darling"
how i long for those words that transform my world into your platform
as we act out the song of Solomon
i'm following your scent till all logic is absent
and you are all that makes sens
my defenses are down on purpose
i want you to hurt this pride
murder this ego as you work inside
nurture this need to
breath you in like you're morning air
and exhale till stars appear
from up here, i can only dream to kiss you
till then i miss you

-by Mike Hernandez aka Dirtflake







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commentCommented on: Thu Jul 30, 2009 @ 09:10pm
I'll post a comment on here just 'cause I can. ^^ I still really really like the poem, and still think you did an excellent job. smile


If you're not careful, the darkness will swallow you. Then how will you hide from me?

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commentCommented on: Thu Jul 30, 2009 @ 09:37pm
thanks i'm glad you liked it biggrin



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