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Journal of Kusugari
I have a long story I plan on continuing every day. I hope you enjoy my writing, and I hope you can point out places that need improvement.
Josh looked up as Silence made his way into 'The Boss'' hideout for his next mission. Silence looked angry, or had an angry aura around him or something. He shoved a guy who got in front of him, then threw another who tripped near him. Josh hadn't seen him like this.
"Yo, what's eaten ya, bro?"
Silence slowly turned to Josh.
"I want my next mission. Anything to get back at this god-damned government."
"Hell, the government was never anyone's friend but-"
Silence grabbed Josh, the first sign of hostility he had shown to him.
"This. Is. PERSONAL."
Silence quickly turned and left. Josh sat for a moment, shrugged, then walked right behind him.
"You still haven't told me what's eaten ya. Was it those chilli dogs down by the corner? You'll have some of the worst stuff eking outta your butt for days, bro. Trust me. Me and my two partners were in a cella waitin for the target ta come out, and I just finished them dogs. My crew nearly died and I nearly blew the mission. Quite literally, actually."
He laughed, but Silence was stone cold. Seriously...would it kill him to crack a smile while at work?






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Montana2957
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commentCommented on: Fri Sep 17, 2010 @ 05:11am
You go from the murder of children to talkin bout chili dogs. WIN!!! Also, if anything hapens to stacey i will personally create a machine to insert me into the universe of your book, and strangle said person until they go WEEARECHUCEE! and stop breathing. Yay!


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