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Torture
i know this is going to sound really stupid, but i have to get some things off my chest, and i can't seem to do that right now sweatdrop . so here goes nothing.

i'm being stabed and torn apart. no one hears me screaming. i sleep at night only to wake in mourning. the laughter doesn't melt my iced over love. i feel condemed to life not lived.
i walk in the indentions on the ice cold floors, with nothing protecting my feet from shards of glass. i want to feel the warmth of life, but am burned by the flames if a life aready living. he laughs at me. he sees me fall in the holes, and makes me jump for the rope that could pull me out.
i wear the signs that say "i am being killed!". i scream out names that could save me. i see the backs of people that have saved me once before. i watch them walk away, turning a blind eye to the demons that have taken my soul.

i am no poet xd . i couldn't but them in real words, so i did my best to express how i felt redface . i hope you don't know what i'm talking about stare .






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helliansangel0688
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commentCommented on: Fri Nov 17, 2006 @ 07:50pm
yes... u are a poet. it's a wonderful poem... kinda depressing.. but wonderful. i couldn't make a better one to save my life. love ya kid.


commentCommented on: Sun Apr 20, 2008 @ 05:33pm
that was nothing to feel embarrassed about, that is a serious thing and it is a good thing you have a place to express and show it. and you seem like a poet to me.



Kuaca
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