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The Journal of Lost is lost.. and one must be lost to read it.
[E] Jan. 16th, 2007

I've broken down at last today
The shards of myself
I've thrown away
A last effort to shatter my core
I dance in delicious madness now
Turning and twisting, nonstop
And oh, the laughter
Harsh, cold and humorless
My last sound slipping into insanity
How appropriate
Useless as by now I have become
Such a burden...
Such a burden...
Without purpose and drive
I can't stand myself now
Such a burden I've become
Yet my broken self is still me
It is still me
Though I reject me
I cling to me too
Unable to be more
Such a burden...


(c) M.F.P. -- 2007






User Comments: [4]
Teh Sock Rocker
Community Member





Tue Jan 16, 2007 @ 05:23pm


I like it... my favourite part is:
"I've broken down at last today
The shards of myself
I've thrown away " It's got a good rhythm to it.

And "I dance in delicious madness now" is an AWESOME line!

You've made me happy and somewhat inspired. Maybe I'll finally get back to writing...


Lost Melfanian
Community Member





Tue Jan 16, 2007 @ 05:32pm


You're quite welcome, my Sock!
Maybe it'll inspire a story.
Out of both of us.

xDD


PlantMage
Community Member





Thu Jan 18, 2007 @ 12:00am


Now I feel like writing. whee


Lost Melfanian
Community Member





Thu Jan 18, 2007 @ 12:27am


whee
What can I say?
I'm somewhat inspirational....?

Nah... sounds typical and self-centered.

Um...

You're welcome.
Yeah, let's go with that one.

3nodding


User Comments: [4]
 
 
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