Since I don't have posts on here, I thought, "Hey, might as well post something!" So...here it is!
For my English class, I had to write some poetry. This one I came up with during my marine bio class...lol...and I want helpful criticism because I want to make my writing better! Thankies to all!
Wings of Night
Soaring on the wings of night Enjoying the pure sense of amazing flight Feathers whisper in my ear Telling me there is naught to fear
Soaring on the wings of night Allowing fear to go without a fight Body as light as a feather Breathing in the scent of heather
Soaring on the wings of night Knowing that I must return to earth by light Mind is racing from the dazzling sight Watching from my impetuous height.
Kyuuketsuki_no_Yami · Tue Nov 28, 2006 @ 02:53am · 2 Comments |