Jack

• Artist: iCandyRainbowz
• Description:
• Date: 11/30/2008
• Tags: jack

he sits in the chair at the end of my bed
one look an you'll know hes dead
hes got a pummkin head
he killed a boy ned

hes a dark evil goust
hes been to cost to cost
he loves to kill
even at his own will

his name jack
hes been brought back
from the dead
out of my head

hes my best friend'
someone i tend
hes evil
hes mine'

i love him
my goust friend

be mean to me an he'll kill you

my best friend jack

Comments

[Prince Asheru Hiriyato]

nice

[Bubblegum Senpai]

It kind of reminds me of the band 'Primus' from back in the day. Very cool. 5/5, but yeah, it should be in poetry.

[Dagon000]

kid you need lessons in proper English. other then that 5/5

[bruised boy]

luv it!
5/5

[StrikeFreedomX10]

poetry section would work better
i would normaly give it a 1/5 for the wrong section
but this is good
4/5

[mate-kun]

lol ^_^