They will Fall

• Artist: CitzenGuard
• Description: He worked for an Empire
  that he loved very much,
  the king , the senate even the army were corrupted and ruthless.
  Some had honor for the first empire but time has passed,
  things need to be done ,
  betrayal , love,war,hate,honor,
  
  
  sorry if i meant some mistakes.
• Date: 07/28/2008
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Here is a short note of my story , i will create a journal of it later , if i win


Edward was a brave warrior for the empire for 12 years , when the kingdom had a new senate,Army guards, King , Things changed. edward was one day choose to guard the king
in a patrol to a nearby city , when it was ambushed by masked men and all were killed also
the king, 2 of Edwards close freinds, and edward were alive still and hurt , edward and his friends are framed for murder because thier farmers and knights say they witnessed the guards did it , later they find out , that the kings double was killed and the real king staged it so vetrans of the old empire wont start a revolution

Comments

[popsinger102]

damn thats awsome

[Kurai Diasuke]

Awsome!! I like it 5/5. Please visit mine please?
~The Diamond Cross of Destiny~

[xXLast Hope RpXx]

Keep up the work O.<

[Mutandanstan]

I agree with Leaver Coconut and Babygal xD

[LeatherCoconut]

Very good, I agree with BabyGal, it could be alot more interesting if you wrote in first person and add a few more details. Senery could be used because of the time period, I for one like to read about what I am supposed to be looking at, and in a castle like medevil time frame I would love to feel and see what I should.
4/5
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[StarShoot3r]

i liked

[Vampire-Demon Blood]

I think Cascaded Ruins is right