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A special world for you and me
A special bond one cannot see
It wraps us up in it's cocoon
And holds us fiercly in it's wounds
It's fingers spread like fine spun gold
Gently westling us to the fold
Like silken thread it holds fast
Bonds like this are meant to last
And though at times a thread may break
A new one forms in its wake
To find us closer and keeps us strong
In a special world where we belong
heart TRUE LOVE heart
- by Celestial Eden |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 11/04/2008 |
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- Title: Love is True
- Artist: Celestial Eden
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Description:
This Peom came from the inside of my soul, my heart, with passion and pride, and I too feel that inside. Enjoy! X3
And if you WANT to, vote a 5/5. Please! -^_^-
- Date: 11/04/2008
- Tags: truelove
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Comments (5 Comments)
- tksunshine93 - 11/04/2008
- i like it!! very cute!! i like your word choice!!!
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- La Decesso - 11/04/2008
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Awww!~ Its so lovely! I like your interpretation of love! 5/5
And to Ace_of_spades6893, You better ask the creator's permission first. Its her art and I wouldnt want anyone using mine with out my consent and if your not going to ask-at least credit her for it. Thank you ;D - Report As Spam
- ace_of_spades6893 - 11/04/2008
- awsome i actaully made a song out of it 5/5
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- METRO SKiiES - 11/04/2008
- Yeah, that's a good poem. Good work with rhyming and conventions, looks really good compared to some of the stuff on this site... Really good! Keep writing!
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- X-Puppy-Rainbow-X - 11/04/2008
- Very Well Done! I think this Poem is Sweet and True. heart
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