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The angel stands, his wings flared open to the welcome of the sun,
His silver hair flying he looks to the sun, wondering his purpose in his life
He has been betrayed, mislead, and lied to,
His soul was blown like dust to the wind, his spirt shatterd, his heart toyed with,
His sword mirriors him, a tool of life or death,
The angel looks to the sun, his wings gently closing, the tears of fear and hate, distrust and anguish rolling down his cheeks,
He wonders who is his love, his last life, his last soul, the last redemption...
His family betrayed him, turned him aside because of his love to protect, to be honest and caring, honorble and loving to the weak
The sun then sets, the moon appearing over the horizon, he looks torwards it, rembering the fears and anguish of his life, the distrust and disloyalty of his friends and family
- Title: The angels soul
- Artist: Demonio69
- Description: This is one of my poems that I make up just by listening to songs, they always come up and I just write soooo...Be nice? Anyways, if you wanna check out my others their in my journal only 2 are private so ya...
- Date: 03/21/2009
- Tags: angels soul
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Comments (5 Comments)
- Demonio69 - 03/24/2009
- Hmmm...I tried adding to this but what I added didnt fit so its not in there...Anyways, ya my gf says Im good but idk
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- darksangel34 - 03/24/2009
- i love it i love it i LOVE it!!!!!! right more i must read more! your an excellent righter!!!1 ( i'm nmot that good but thats a whole 'nother subject!) right more!!!! 5/5!
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- Demonio69 - 03/24/2009
- Huh, ya it is ^^....Mostly though its about how messed up life can get if you love someone so much, then they just use you
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- Sunafire - 03/24/2009
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Some beautiful imagery, and linguistic techniques going on.
Music is great to write poems to, and you created a very nice one smile
4*S biggrin - Report As Spam
- Demonio69 - 03/23/2009
- What is so good about this poem that it deserves two 5 stars? I dont get it man...
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