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ok i have yet another!! and this is a longer 1... mayb not as long but still long enough for me to call it long...


*Unwanted Future*
Heart broken twins,
Wait for fate.
Getting ready for,
Their unwanted future.
Never expecting to be
Love stricken.
Hating themselves.
As almost never apart,
Knowing every crush
Each has not wanting to.
But in the end saying
About the same thing
These two hate the
Fact of everything
In this and never really
Talk for real
About it. Hating the
People who took
Their hearts but
Loving them at the
Same time. And
Hating each other
For their mistakes
But staying together
For their unwanted
Future.


ok this 1 mayb sad???
i dunno but ne ways this is one of the poems i had dun tht has a .....
TITTLE!!!!
yep most my poems DONT have tittles....






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arabelle elizabeth
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commentCommented on: Sat May 17, 2008 @ 10:27pm
its not tht sad but it is still sad...wat is this 1 about...i wonder*thinks*nope cant think of anythin...


commentCommented on: Sat Jun 28, 2008 @ 06:03am
Very well written expressing the viewpoint of the author as to be a close related person to them. What I've concieved from it is that there are two people who were in love and then broke up, ruining each other's life and then they say they hate each other but inside they know they still love them but jsut aren't ready and aren't sure if they should voice that feeling. But yet they still stay together going through life. I like it



-2 Z Zelly
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